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SAMPLE ESSAY

LETTER OF SELF INTRODUCTION

Thank you giving me a chance to introduce myself. I am a creative mind and named O O O.
I was born in Naju on January 31, 1992. I am the graduating class from Sangmun high school. I would like to apply for journalism and Mass Communication Study. I was brought up with utmost card and affection by my family that father who is diligent, my mother who is always kind and my young brother who has a strong sense of responsibility. It helped me to gain confidence and independence in my life.
The reason for applying in journalism and Mass Communication Study is that I want to study some special major that other people never took. I love to meet people through Internet and desire to know that they think(desire, demand), induce me choice for the major.
In person, I have studied many subjects about new media-related such as New Media Policy, International Promotion, Image Communication, Organization Communication and Telecommunication and so on. The most interesting subject to me is New Media subject, which induce me to take some more subject about it. Furthermore, I studied English and Chinese because I thought that knowing many languages is power nowadays.
I am fluent with managing personal computer( Internet, Microsoft Office applications, Visual Basic, website-making-related application, server management and DB applications as well.
During my English study tour life in Philippine, I attempted to get all advantages in studying abroad as far as I could. For example, I was always eager to make friends in order not only to study their culture and thought but also to have good relationship.
While I was receiving a scholarship and experiencing the president of my school for three years, I paid careful attention to my attitude of mind. And that led me to good leadership. I think concerning other people is the most important thing in human relations. I'm a good listener rather than a comedian. I'm quite afraid of strangers. I would love to go to 000 University to pursue my dream. Thank you very much for reading my letter.
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